Descriptive Composition

She stopped in front of the towering building and stared at it in awe

The second example is more vivid because it provides specific details and sensory information. 'Towering building' creates a visual image of size, while 'stared at it in awe' shows the character's emotional response and action. The first example is plain and lacks descriptive details. Vivid language uses specific words, imagery, and emotional context to help readers visualize and feel the scene.

As many of the five senses as possible

A good descriptive composition should include as many of the five senses (sight, sound, touch, smell, and taste) as possible because this creates a complete sensory experience for the reader. Using only sight limits the description, while using sight and sound is better but still incomplete. Including multiple senses makes the description more immersive and realistic, helping readers feel like they are actually experiencing what is being described.

Mind map

A mind map helps organize ideas before writing because it allows you to visually connect related thoughts and details around a central topic. It helps you see relationships between different aspects of your description and ensures you don't forget important details. A calculator, dictionary alone, or clock are not organizational tools for planning descriptive writing, though a dictionary can help with word choice later in the process.

External features like color and shape

When describing an object, you should include external features like color, shape, material, weight, and texture because these help readers visualize the object. You should also include internal features like function and how it operates. Price, ownership, and purchase location are not descriptive details that help create a mental image of the object's appearance or characteristics.